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I'm going through it again, and nothing seems to be happening with either Liza or Susan. In fact, Liza seems to have dropped out of the story altogether. And Susan hasn't said anything about the opera. I can't tell where I went wrong, so I've gone back to day 6.  We'll have to do the whole trip to Belugio again.

Long, long before. The masturbation scene is fairly early on in the game, before you and Rachel go to the movie.

I want one of her pendants.

Check out the work of the Dutch artist Denise Rosenboom. She reminds me a lot of the character Rebecca. I can't post a link here, but you can find her on FB.  

Yes. When the sisters and mother mention children, click the negative choice. ("No children" for Bella, "Say nothing" for Susan, etc. )This will eliminate the pregnancy outcomes, and if the mother and sisters don't get pregnant, no one else will, either. 

You do very well. Simple rule is that lay takes an object, but lie does not. So, you lay the book on the table, but at that point, the book lies on the table. So people lie together in bed. They do not lay together. "Rachel was lying there naked." I'm probably the only one who notices.

Another error: In Part II of the Sasha story, you say she was wearing the same shirt, "like she'd just came out of bed." SB like she'd just come...

Yes, I missed Megan after I got into the love relationship with Bella.

I thought 0.23 was the end.

Why? What's coming next?

If you feel like being completely correct, I could try to explain the distinction  between "lay" and "lie."

Here's another little glitch. I've started the game over from the beginning, and it's skipped the opportunity to read DeSade. Problem seems to be that if I visit Bella's room, and then Rachel's, my only other choice is to go to bed. The option to visit Susan's room vanishes. It's like I can only visit two rooms on any given night. So now I'm reading Man With A Maid without ever having seen DeSade. I am sad.

Yes, the confusion of "too" and "to" is common throughout. (See my additional examples below.) 

Just looked that up. Wow.

I played the censored version first time through, and the problem for me was that if Max is just a friend of the family, the story doesn't make much sense. I kept wondering why Mrs. Steel should be so outraged that Rachel was pregnant. Boys knock up their girlfriends all the time.  Unfortunate, yes, but not what you'd call deviant. And even if all the women in the household get pregnant, it's hard to believe the cops would take much of an interest.

Then I downloaded the uncensored version, and I thought, OK, now I get it.

I've read other French erotica from the period, though, and in general it seems to be less aggressive. 

As for the opera, Walküre might have been relevant, too, since it involves brother-sister incest, but it's not at all erotic, and, as Susan says, Wagner is way too much for a novice. I remember reading years ago about a performance in which the soporano in Salome actually appeared nude (briefly), so there is precedent. 

This isn't a complaint or anything, just an observation. I'm wondering if all  Victorian English erotica is as violent as the examples you use. I've read the Loves of Lord Roxborough, and that too involves a randy aristocrat imposing his  will on poor relations and a hapless servant girl.  Sure, the women come to enjoy it, but rape is still rape. To get all deconstructionist, the stories seem to be reflections of the empire, with British men doing to women what they were doing to the rest of the world. 

Salome was an excellent choice for the opera, btw. You do know your stuff,

Still enjoying it, Perverteer.

I'll list other typos or glitches here:

Making love to Liza at the pool: "Her pleading eyes make you want to grant her witsh."..sb wish

First day back on the island with everyone: Susan say, "I think so to." SB too.

Opposite mistake at the wedding dance, when Iris says, "we have a life together to look forward too." SB to.

In the extra scene between Susan and Adriana, you say, "...her tongue is so far up Susan's cunt that Adriana is almost unable to breath." SB breathe.

Or in the first few frames, as each of the major characters is introduced. I changed the mother's name a few times as the game went on and our relationship changed. 

In addition, when James suggests spying on the girls in Rachel's room, agree to it. When you have the chance to spy on her in the shower, do so, and choose to stroke yourself when you see her.  Later, when she sees you masturbating at your computer, don't stop. Let her watch.  Over breakfast, when she asks if you've ever had sex, be honest (don't boast) and be sure to question her about her virginity, rather than just reassuring her. All these choices will get her corruption score up to six or seven, which is what you'll need for the relationship to start after the movie (be sure to tell her it was arousing). That night, she will come to your room, looking for company, and you'll be on your way.  

There are also walk-throughs you can find online. 

I have played the game multiple times, experimenting with different outcomes, and have experienced none of the glitches mentioned in the comments.  What I like is that the names of the major characters can be changed, so I've given Max my name (of course), and renamed the women Mommy, Mandy, Mindy, and Missy. (Little Missy is my girl.) A good tip is to save the choice menus at major turning points, so you can alter the outcomes without having to go back to the beginning. 

A couple of comments:

In the first scene in which the hero sleeps with his mother and all his sisters, you say, "Moans, cries and sighs fill the air as you all make love without abandon."  The proper phrase is WITH abandon, because abandon itself means to be without restraint or inhibition.

And before the big night: "Sleeping with either of the girls seems to soon..." Should be too.

I've noted other mistakes, too, but they are not as glaring. 

If you decide not to get Rachel, the youngest girl, pregnant, in the first solo lovemaking scene with her a couple of months later, she still has her baby belly. 

Too late to change content, I know, but I was hoping Adriana would show up to her wedding in the nude--on the orders of her mistress--and she would insist on marrying the mom as well as, or instead of,  the boy. She is mom's subbie, after all.

On the island, Riley says she doesn't have a bathing suit, but then in the next scene we see her in a bikini. She should have appeared on the dock nude.  Or decided to live without clothes altogether, which would have been yummy. 

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