The background art was crisp. This has a lot of potential!
I know it's a jam game and the scope knife is merciless. I wasn't sure if the choice of colors versus all black and white scenes was because of the jam or a curatorial decision. The font and font color was very hard to read, especially the quick menu at the bottom. And same with the voice acting. It felt like lines were missing rather than certain select lines were voiced. Music would go a long way! Consider adding SFX to compliment your camera pan outs and flashes of red.
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choice of colors was intentional and in some aspects were originally designed to play a part in the storytelling. We had a lot of trouble with finding a font that would fit for sure. Wasnt able to even get the voice acting in all the way, but post todays update I would say 90% of the VO is in and fully functional, some are still glitching out which is unfortunate and requires a deeper dive. Adding SFX is deff something i'm making a note of as I agree, SFX would really help make things pop! Thank you so much for the thoughts and suggestions. This was my first jam and hearing that it has a lot of potential makes me very excited :)