The starting music was quite loud. The main menu looked quite pretty. The in game music however was very fantastical. Its surprising to see a visual novel entry that doesnt have all the options directly displayed. Not a big issue but quite uncommon. The menu font is a bit hard to read. The story was nice and I found the art style for the characters a nice choice, stands out quite a bit, does conceal some of the depth of a character but works for the game. Also the game was quite static, not a whole lot of character movement and such. Good work for what I assume to be a single person based on the others being general links? either way, good job!
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Thank you for the kind and detailed review! Yep, it was just me working on this one. So glad you liked the story and the art style, story was my main focus with art being a source of anxiety. Little worried about my own hearing though because I didn't realize the starting music was loud, I'll have to fiddle around with that later...