Very fun, quirky and funny game, I liked the music.
I think the background when you are fighting should move slightly.
When meeting William, there's a part where his name is displayed in the name box instead of Boy before he actually presents himself.
Gale's Magic doesn't work and it's imposible to escape, even in random battles.
The guard command only does an attack.
I couldn't beat Krem and Davey, and in one point I didn't gain any more exp from battles (maybe i'll keep trying someday).
You did a pretty good job, there are some flaws but they can be fixed! You should add a better description for the game to get people more interested.
What if you wanted to go to heaven but Old mc clee said no minorities.