I like the concept! A thing that irks me are the floor patterns in the mansion near the carpet just being a bit wonky. I'm a huge fan of how you handled the dialogue - explaining just enough to let the player figure out what is going on makes what the characters say all the more impactful. I'd make the background in the motorbike segment go faster, currently it looks a bit weird. This game is for sure something I'd like to revisit when it's in a more complete state - good job!