Great work! Cool art, the layout is good and has a fun concept. Monsters are fun and weird which suits the theme of the adventure. The map is cool but I find it a bit hard to parse/use out of the box. The numbered 'tables' should probably be in a table format, it is a bit tricky to separate the entries at a glance in just prose columns. The font might be borderline too small on some devices or for some people, but Aside from that I'm looking forward to running it!
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Thanks for the feedback! I'm sure there's room for improvement. About the font size and font family, I actually I wasn't sure about the right size, so I just made it like Knave 2e rulebook. I recognize the isometrics maps are harder to parse, having a 3rd dimension there's no clear path to follow visually, but is the only way I find to add verticality. I also never know when to stop adding little details XD