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Looking forward to running this one! Very clean style. Good concept, and visually appealing. The font is a bit small. The change in density from page 9 onwards is slightly jarring, and pages 12+ feel cramped in comparison to the earlier ones (Jam page limit is probably the culprit though, so no worries). Fun little horror scenario, but It feels a bit weirdly placed for Knave, I could see myself using it for Into the Odd or a Panic Engine horror system. I feel like there is slightly more steering required by the DM compared to the usual OSR stuff: I don't think some of the resolution stuff needs to be spelled out, but that is probably just a preference thing! Looks great though excellent work!

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Thank you for the kind words and the insightful critique, I really appreciate it!

Keep up the great work, I'll definitely enjoy running this one! :D

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Amazing, please let me know how it goes!