I really enjoyed what I got to read so far! For me it just stopped after talking to Loretta with Bernard, you mentioned it's just a snippet on the itch page but I wasn't entirely sure if that was just as far as the story goes as of now or if it was a bug ..? anyway I couldn't load my save either after that happened
I really love what you have so far for the plot and characters, it feels like a great setup for an intriguing story! I hope you can resolve whatever issues you were having and finish the project one day :>
Minor critique point: It would've been nice to have some visual indication as to which character is speaking. It was usually obvious enough by the text itself so it's not a huge issue. Also sometimes the text was slightly cut off on the right side
Lastly. I loved the OST and the animated logo!! And the whole design of the page too!