Loved the map, it's placement in the layout and easy to clean look. The layout of wording would have benefited from columns. Nice encounter table. And art was engaging.
Layout and more contrast would help reading through, but that comes with practice and feedback. An example would be that the Title sections use of a purplish maroon was good for the overall color scheme, but got lost in the bg image because it blended in. White space to break up the color and emphasize more would help with that.