The illustrations are incredible, they're all very evocative!
I like that just about everything has at least one unique element that helps it stand out in your imagination.
I think a brief overview at the start of the booklet would be helpful.
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Jon is an extremely talented illustator, and we had a very easy and fun collaboration. It was amazing that he just showed up on the discussion posts and said, here I am.
Thank you for your feedback. If I make a proper cover for the adventure, I will include a summary, overview, or at least a teaser blurb of some kind.