I am in love with the maps you provided, they are beautifully detailed without being cluttered. I really like the Khirkinchu Folk and their illustration too.
I think it might help to flip pages 3 and 2, with The Story So Far right up front, to give readers an idea of what they'll find in the other pages.
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Looking over it again, that makes a lot of sense. Thank you for the feedback! It's my first successful attempt a loose isometric style and I'm pretty happy with it. Also, the khirkinchu folk are my favorite :)
I'm also working on a version condensing the maps and their keys onto a 2-page spread, so you don't have to scroll back and forth and rotate pages to view keyed material. I think that will free up room to have the big maps at the end to use and enjoy.