I am very glad I was able evoke that history and magical realism successfully, and you saying so makes me feel I'm on the right track. I am definitely thinking about ways to prioritize how the story is laid out for ease of play, and organizing all the information better so it's not so hard to pull the threads together on the fly. Thank you for taking the time to read my work and tell me your thoughts!
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I really like that you did a noir for this, I had fun reading it, and the silly situations in the club are a fun clashing tone to traditional noir. Very fever-dream Lynchian. Well executed. It took me a minute to get used to the layout's flow, specifically the black text bubbles. I think it be easier to read if it were just bolded black text, but that's just my opinion.
Looking over it again, that makes a lot of sense. Thank you for the feedback! It's my first successful attempt a loose isometric style and I'm pretty happy with it. Also, the khirkinchu folk are my favorite :)
I'm also working on a version condensing the maps and their keys onto a 2-page spread, so you don't have to scroll back and forth and rotate pages to view keyed material. I think that will free up room to have the big maps at the end to use and enjoy.