I really liked how you framed several parts of the text, pages 3 and 4 are especially excellent. Bodoc, the giant head shouting insults on the top of a hill, really stuck with me. You did a great job with the brief, italicized description for each of the monsters and locations.
If I ran this, I think I would modify The Game of Champions so that instead of using pieces, the players were shrunk down onto the board and had to fight the other side.
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Thanks for the feedback! I was torn on how to do the Game of Champions. I knew I wanted it to be like chess. Originally the PC's were going to be able to summon ANY creature they had ever seen to do battle in their place, but I couldn't work out how to help the GM come up with stats for literally any creature on the fly.
So I came up with the idea of collectible pieces, like Pokemon.