Some solid stuff here, but the layout made it difficult to find important information. Layout choices like breaking up the text with colors, contrast, or borders might be helpful.
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Thank you, I 100% agree with your criticism - Time management was a big challenge during this game jam, but everyone's wonderful comments have inspired me to revise and improve this afterward. I'm glad despite the challenges you managed to gleam something interesting, and thank you so much for checking my entry out!