Clean layout, tight writing, lots to chew on. Wet hot knavery like it says on the can! The stated inspirations of Lankhmar x "all of Florida" makes me kind of yearn for a "Florida Man" Fafhrd pastiche. You should write a short story :)
Thanks so much! I've actually started writing little sword and sorcery adventure stories as presents for friends and relatives, ha ha. (My ninja-obsessed nieces get assassin stories for their birthdays.)
