There is something innately disturbing in factories, isn't there? The endless rows of perfectly identical things.
You really captured that oddness here. There was so much I didn't expect - I imagine players would have the same experience and feel a genuine sense of dread at points.
The Flesh Cracklinator and Psychoseed Engine will definitely stick in my imagination. I quite liked the Wonder Sticker table too.
I fear that the images used may have actually been a bit detrimental. Your descriptions were all vivid but I found myself struggling to divorce the starburst wrappers from the more whimsical elements.
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Thanks a lot for your detailed impressions! It makes me happy to know I was able to convey my intentions in writing. The lack of proper art is something that I regret quite a bit, there’s so much here that would get people’s imagination going if they had an image to start with. I had assumed, if i wasn’t including anything, it’d be worse than if I didn’t, but at this point I am in complete agreement with you :)