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To begin with, why is the MC so obsessed with the idea that the girls are his mother and sister?

They are NOT!!! The MC is a completely different soul stuck into a different body. And, despite what Selene said in the beginning, the MC's thoughts CLEARLY show that he remembers that event just fine. So they are just horny women surrounding him. It's every bit as moronic as "Oh, no, it's so inappropriate for me to be attracted to my ROOMMATE." "How can I have thoughts like THAT about my LANDLADY" Because it's EXACTLY that.

You have a landlady, and two roommates. Sure, THEY think that you are related to them, but YOU KNOW that you are NOT!!! And if the LANDLADY and the ROOMMATES aren't bothered by the idea of an incestuous relationship, then why is the MC being such a bitch about it?

For Christ's sake, there is an Asian mom, two Asian sisters, and a Caucasian "son." Clearly they are NOT related!


Then there is the "quality" writing:

"Mom, I don't even know what college I am supposed to attend."

"Go down the street, get on a bus, then take a train."

So, what you're saying, is that there is ONE bus line, ONE train line, and ONE college in this city. The MC has fucking amnesia (the lazy writer's catch all McGuffin), HOW would those "directions" help him? You couldn't even figure out that the mom having the sisters show him how to get to the college that they ALL attend would be the most logical response.


On top of that:

A goddess gives you the power of seduction. And she tells you that she needs your help regaining her powers, by "spreading love" with said power of seduction.

And, ignoring the little pussy's abject terror at being able to make three UNRELATED women horny, he is still a little fucking pussy with EVERY FUCKING GIRL IN THE FUCKING GAME!!!

"Oh, gosh, oh, gee, I shouldn't let myself touch ANY girl ever. They are gross and have cooties." Sure, that ain't a direct quote, but it's pretty much how he behaves.

The ONLY person in all of creation more stupid than this MC is the goddess that pinned her hopes for redemption on this closeted homo.


And, yeah, yeah, yeah, they will ALL become his personal fucktoys before it's all over. But who fucking cares? I have to endure the whiny pussy to get to the fun times. And this MC should have been pushed in front of the train, not allowed to step into it.


Furthermore, it is a kinetic visual novel. Which means that I don't get ANY control or agency in the story. I can't reject a girl, and I can't focus on a girl. I am stuck reading EVERY bit of stupidity that this BAD writer will write.


And, since it's a kinetic novel, I can't even "skip" the idiotic text boxes, and just watch the sex. Because without choices, the "skip" button will never stop skipping.


After Selene sent the MC off to begin this game, my favorite part was deleting it from my drive!

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cope harder then

Hey! Genius! Is there a Thug behind you? Pointing a Weapon to your Head? Do you have the Choice to play or die? If you don´t like it - just quit. It doesn´t mean you can not be a critic, but you don´t have to be an Asshole about it. So - for this special Situation... just shut the Fuck up Moron!