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I hate to say it but the radiant art seems out of place , the language and word flow makes it feel like the reader is being instructed through a manuscript voiced by the phantom of a medieval monk but the illustrations kinda snapped me out of it. The setting is so well done and I would love to see the text reworked without the colored illustrations. The motifs are good but the colors break with the matte layout.

I really like how every spot has so much character and the worldbuilding is on-point ! The whole adventure feels like it's built upon actual folklore abd I love that! As mentioned below, I also love a good low-level Peasant mudcrawl!
 

haha all criticism welcome! yeah, it starts out with manuscript art and then... splat. i don't know if anyone noticed, but i took a sliiight shortcut using emojis. i hoped it would come across as charming rather than random if i was consistent enough with them. now that you mention it, i'd have loved to continue the manuscript theme throughout.

thanks for the kind words! i tried like hell not to call the lurking threat of cockatrice by it's name. feels a little more folksy that way? maybe?

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I'd draw monsters for your next adventure free of charge if you want some after the jam! I think the radiating illustrations but transferred to a woodcut effect would also look good!

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very kind! if i'm crazy enough to take up another jam, i'll be sure to pester you!