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The use of a Captcha puzzle is ingenious.

I liked the interior art, especially on the Dramatis Personae page and on page 6 - which would double great as an alternate cover image. The concept of running an AI through a dungeon, before running the players, is very interesting and perfectly suited to this moment IRL.

The map was well laid out and I love that the room descriptions were included right on the same pages.

I appreciate that you wanted to convey an important message to your readers, but I think the paragraph "The environmental impact of AI cannot be overstated," would fit better on page 15 with further reading, keeping page 3 on just how to run the adventure  (especially because it's such a unique idea).

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Thank you for the feedback! I definitely agree the transition feels a bit jarring where I left it in the Author’s Note. Moving it back to the Further Reading probably would've flowed better! 

Thank you again for checking out my adventure!

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Thank you for making and sharing it!