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“A small Elephant stuck in the wall” made me laugh. Nice job with the random tables! They provide a lot of funny randomness. Your idea of phases with events that will transpire is also really nice and keeps the story developing. Letting the PCs earn their reputation as newcomers is also very clever and fun. The only thing I would suggest adding is an adventure hook or two to give the PCs a clear objective to go there (although fair enough, a gambling party is already a reason on its own :D). I can totally see myself running it in the future!

Thanks for reading and reaching out to give feedback. I was expecting no one to actually read this to be honest! I think your suggestion to add adventure hooks is a great one and I had thought of this but did not have time to work it in at the end. I will hopefully be making updates with more and better art and streamlining the text more.