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Sweet and short, just one double sided page. Nicely done with the concise description and layout!

I like the adventure premise, ash covered and demon infested land. But as others pointed out it seems to miss a clear resolution and has incomplete tables.

Very nice ominous adventure. The strange happenings table and growing horror really builds up the creepyness as the PCs explore more. Well done!

Its really nice to read an adventure based upon Korean history. Clever way to set up the premise using the two random tables.

Oh I remember the Disco Inferno music in Dungeon Keeper 2 :D. Lovely little casino adventure, easy to read, and the monster art is adorable.

Super nice map, and very strong theme enhanced by the music. The NPCs also have strong personalities. Looks like a great adventure with a good balance of exploration, combat, and social encounters.

The “Illusion! It IS a rat!” d8 modification made me laugh :D. Great map and artwork. The baddy relying on a fickle patron is a nice setup too for multiple resolutions.

Really nice artwork, layout, and color palette. Love the hallway of slugs and Aster the sassy door.

A lickforge! This adventure is an absolute gem. Would love to run this one someday.

The moth blanket is a horrifyingly ingenious magic item. And the room-generating lanterns are such a cool idea! I would suggest moving the lantern list next to the lantern explanation, took me a while to find it :).

Ominous entrance, epic band battle, whacky situation with thieves stuck in the ceiling, this adventure was a roller coaster to read (in the good way)! Its pretty dark, but also offers a lot of comic relief. Very fun!

Being a non-native English speakers, this adventure taught me a few new words :D. Fantastic writing, I can hear the words spoken to me, it really creates a vibe.

Maybe I missed something but I could not figure out what HD means. Hit dice?

“A small Elephant stuck in the wall” made me laugh. Nice job with the random tables! They provide a lot of funny randomness. Your idea of phases with events that will transpire is also really nice and keeps the story developing. Letting the PCs earn their reputation as newcomers is also very clever and fun. The only thing I would suggest adding is an adventure hook or two to give the PCs a clear objective to go there (although fair enough, a gambling party is already a reason on its own :D). I can totally see myself running it in the future!

I think the artwork in this adventure is really nice. The cover drew me in, and the charcoal-sketchy images throughout give it its own unique vibe. It’s easy to read and the random tables provide a lot of variety!

The art you made for this adventure is so good! I wanted to review this one for a while. Love the strong personalities you gave all the NPCs, well described in a concise amount of words. The whole adventure is, really. The red text marking the resolution of each location and the aftermath chapter is also very helpful. Looks like a joy to run!

Yeah :) thanks! They were fun to put on the table in my playtest, gave it an extra vibe of creepy. So I had to sacrifice half a page to include them.

Thank you :D I had a lot of fun thinking of different mechanics per section, and adding an extra layer of gray to the story for the PCs to question their morals over.

Thanks so much! I’m happy to hear that everything is easy to find for you. It was an important goal for me to not make the GM search or even flip a page to run it.

Thank you so much! I worked hard on squeezing each section on its own page (and had to kill some darlings haha). I’m happy to hear it did not go unnoticed :D.

Yeah I have no idea what the deal is with this quarantine flag. Must have triggered the system somehow, maybe because this is the only entry on my account. As you have seen the PDF is not password protected at all :). I sent support an email but reading from others, it might take weeks before they look into it.

Oh I think you should be able to ignore the warning and download it anyway? Really crap that the system flagged me, perhaps because it was my first entry. Anyway, thanks for trying I appreciate it!

Looks like a fun dungeon delve with a lot of content!

The layout and style you produced here is so nice! Love the black and white and yellow, though the only downside is that printing it is expensive in ink, and black areas will show through the back on standard 80 grams paper.

The hive and artifact generators are very nice too. Clever to stick it in 1 table and roll the dice twice.

I love how the monsters tell the GM how this game is played, so flavorful! Very interesting approach to draw the readers attention and keep the reading fun. You made a wonderful adaption of sesame street and twisted into a game that looks really enjoyable.

This is a very fun adventure, and seems easy to run. Love the print & cut component for the leaflets.

Sweet adventure! Very unique ideas in here. Tendrilettes, psychoseed engine, love the names you came up with 😄.

Interesting hexcrawl mechanic! I like the island setup and many places to explore.

Very creepy adventure, sad story too. Love the artwork. Hate “the creature” 😆. Its terrifying. The memory triggers are a really neat way to give it a weakness.

Having the PCs have life purposes that start draining instead of inventory slots is a nice twist that really shows how versatile the system is. The adventure seems like quite the deep dive, lot of content!

My suggestion would be to improve the readability, the font is small and the contrast not always very readable. I appreciate the content warning!

Nice to see another bog monster adventure 😆. The hexcrawl mechanic sounds very fun! Seems straightforward and easy to run, and the players have full agency on where to go.

I like the clear setup: “this is your task, you have 2 hours”. The whole adventure is a unique take with many original ideas. Superb!

This adventure is an explosion of unique ideas and deep topics. Love the pink, and the somewhat chaotic vibe yet it remains easy to read. Leaves a lot of room for flavoring it the way the reader likes. Great entry!

I like the amount of social interactions this adventure provides and the main dungeon has lots of encounters too!

This adventure is stuffed with fun encounters. It looks like you can mostly run it room by room without reading the adventure in detail beforehand.

Looks like a fun adventure to run. Love the art and the fleshed out npcs. The content advice and tips on the back are a really useful addition too!

Love the art and the layout, very clear and easy to manage. Also a funny world-changing premise. Looks like a great adventure to run. What I miss a bit is why the cult is doing this, and why the players should join.

Thank you!

Thanks so much!

Yeah I think its great! I think I was just missing a small explanation on how these rafts work.

thank you so much! It looks like the system can auto flag your project as quarantined under certain conditions that are kept secret. I’ll have to wait until itch.io staff unquarantines it, which can take weeks :(.

Superb artwork, really nice NPC descriptions! It looks like a multi-session dungeon delve that guarantees a fun time.