Great choice to have an off-white background, it gives it a personality from the moment you open the booklet. I like your choices of artwork and the logo for Headless Press is brilliant.
I like the background or "Note" you provided on Succubi/Incubi, that's useful inside and outside of this adventure.
A different font in the table headings might help them stand out, since they share a color with some of the rows. There might be ellipsis missing in the second "In the Dungeon..." box on page 2.
I think you did a good job keeping the rooms on each floor interesting, none of them feel like 'filler'.
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Thanks for the feedback! There is a kind of silly story I'll share in a devlog about the colour choice, but I'm pretty keen on how it looks XD
Thanks! I wanted to provide a bit of context for why Ph'aarna is the way she is; I have a slightly different metaphysics for magical/spiritual beings within the implied setting of the adventure that I will probably expand on in future releases. I didn't want to bog down the adventure and it is already pretty stuffed to the page limit, so I'm glad that got the general idea across!