The elegy was very evocative! And the dungeon being made out of lights in the darkness is probably the most original I’ve seen so far in the writing I’ve read. Jack Dusk reminded me a lot of Jareth from Labyrinth, and that movie is one of my favorite things, so there’s a lot to like here! Also, thanks for making your own art. I was very reluctant to use my own, but everyone so far in this jam has humbled me by doing things I could not, thanks for teaching me a lesson :) cheers!