The layout on page 2 and onwards is really good! I was a bit taken aback by the formatting on the first page, but after that everything was very, very pleasantly readable :) Slowly becoming a fan of pointcrawls, lots of good, classic fun in here. Something about your writing makes the volcano very attractive to explore! Also, appreciate that the volcano ERUPTS! and doesn’t say it kills everyone :) gotta give them some hope!