The slight rotations on the text are very well done! It gave it a strong analog feel despite being read on a screen. The idea of exploring a remote location in space that hosts some totally alien creatures (Astraldendum, Astralmycons) gives it a touch of horror that is just my style :) I think the idea of alien presences warping the tower further would make this a lot more impressive! But I like a lot what there is already.