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Loved it! Sawyer and Jude have sucha fun, sad dynamic that is very tasty so far, and I'm excited to read more about them and their heisty ghosthunter-type crew goin into the weirdo zone. The world building is neat, districts and such, the mystery wells, and ill have to see how merit/charter magicsystem works but that could be fun too. Only mild complaint id have is some prose at the start is a lil stiff/repetitive, some scenes could be shortened or use a b plot within em to add some spice, and maybe just a smiiiidge more subtlety w/ jude's inner dialogue in the first couple scenes might feel better.

Can't wait to read more tho! pls no hiatus i beg u!

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Ty for the feedback! That's very valuable, and I agree with your points. Really glad to hear you like it so far too!