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Love the writing, love how ballsy the first chapter was, love the crack fic vibes. The dialogue is very natural and ya got a great choice in sound design and the visuals/sprites are very cute too. 

My one big complaint is the itch page. I'd rather have a comprehensive list of trigger warnings to expect throughout the whole VN instead of chapter summaries, so that the narrative can surprise me rather than advertising "chpt2 won't have x or y", which can take away some of the suspense. 

I'm also curious what genres will this cover? Namely if it'll have romance as a plot or subplot, and if so, will there be routes or will it be kinetic? Will it be m/m? mono or poly? I get some of this might be spoilers but usually that kinda stuff's advertised from the start. Alsoooo I can't find the patreon link!

Loved it! Sawyer and Jude have sucha fun, sad dynamic that is very tasty so far, and I'm excited to read more about them and their heisty ghosthunter-type crew goin into the weirdo zone. The world building is neat, districts and such, the mystery wells, and ill have to see how merit/charter magicsystem works but that could be fun too. Only mild complaint id have is some prose at the start is a lil stiff/repetitive, some scenes could be shortened or use a b plot within em to add some spice, and maybe just a smiiiidge more subtlety w/ jude's inner dialogue in the first couple scenes might feel better.

Can't wait to read more tho! pls no hiatus i beg u!

woooo im excited

i double click and it doesn't launch, though it does show up in my processes. is there an error log or something idk much about renpy

heeelp i can't get the pc version to launch :( 

i love your writing! very unique, and such cute sprite expressions too! excited to read more :> 

commenting on old post as not to bump anything new but I was wondering what happened to far beyond the update! :(

i think a dylus kissing scene would help a lot and a benignus kissing scene and a torin kissing scene and the king too and 

i like him and he is cute and i want us to grow old and happy together

i want to kiss benignus

Yesss vore planet!!!

very exciting first build! Love all the boys, and the scares were cooked just right. 

Looking forward to more! 

the character writing is impressive! everyone has a very strong voice and lots of depth. I usually simp for the big bara boys, but Hiro completely stole my heart <3.  

as for the plot, this project is looking ambitious AF. Seriously. Each route seems to be working with a ton of different genres and plot threads, which is cool to see, even if it ends up a little muddled sometimes.

excited to read more! (pls be kind to Hiro ;_;) 

Woo! great stuff! I love Kavir!!!

is there anyway to save # 3 sobsob ;_;
great game tho hothothot

incredible writing! please say you're working on more projects!

Great game!
Getting an error on Taun when revisiting the clone at the red tentacles

first :^) poggers vn dangpa! I wanna marry Whitman!

You did sucha good job Horrorbuns! Love it <3!