I like it so far, I just think it's a little bit fast paced, I know you are planning to add more to this game (and I think you should, we don't have a lot of mpreg games and yours sounds promising) but I think this first initial scene felt a little bit rushed, you could add more dialogues, more dirty talk or something, just so we can feel a little bit more immerse and not just like he grabbed us, fucked us and done, you know? but I really enjoyed what you have put out so far, we could become the town slut, help populate this place, maybe teach a little bit of hygiene (not too much tho lol) and the first one could be like our pimp/lover I don't know, just some ideas, but hope you keep posting and updating <3
Hi Wiccane! Thank you so much for your feedback! And yeah, admittedly the writings not paced well, (the blowjob scene is literally 3 dialogues long lol) and also i don't like how i've written certain dialogues. English is not my primary language so thats why some scenes have gramatical errors i might've missed. I'll try my best to improve on that regard. I'll be planning an update for late October/Early November. Again, thank you!
-Birch