Hi Wiccane! Thank you so much for your feedback! And yeah, admittedly the writings not paced well, (the blowjob scene is literally 3 dialogues long lol) and also i don't like how i've written certain dialogues. English is not my primary language so thats why some scenes have gramatical errors i might've missed. I'll try my best to improve on that regard. I'll be planning an update for late October/Early November. Again, thank you!
-Birch