Nice game! It’s tough to go for a narrative based game in a jam where most submissions are heavily focused on gameplay (I made a narrative focused game too), but I think you executed the narrative well here.
The character art is excellent and I like the SFX during gameplay! Something that would be nice if you expand on this would be a text speed option, but it’s not a big deal for the jam submission. Some light music at different sections would also enhance the atmosphere a little.
Overall, it’s a well done game! Like the other commenter said, I think you really nailed the visual novel portion (both art and narrative) which I think is what your main focus was on.