Awesome report! Sounds like it fired on all cylinders, :)
For Sector 4, there is a very short line in the very start about blast doors closing off the depressurization that really ought to be repeated more clearly
It's funny you mention Hour 5 bc when I did the final proof pass (not sure I caught the 3/4 typo tho), I was waffling on cutting one or two, but erred on the side of, "Ok, GMs will know what they can/can't do, it's fine." I'm glad that gamble worked out, ha.
Thanks so much for the comment! Really makes mt day, :)