Hi, I wanted to share my lets play because I have quite a bit of feedback. I think the game looks and plays fairly well but the lack of story and narrative cohesion is not doing it any favours, it feels unfinished that way but I think it only needs a few small fixes to remedy that.
So if you like, you can watch me talking at length about some tips or you can ask me some questions here on itch, I am happy to give some further feedback if needed (and wanted) :)
Hi, thank you so much for playing and for sharing such detailed feedback in your video! I watched it, and I really appreciate the time you took to go through everything. I agree that the story could be stronger, and I’ll definitely take your tips to heart as I work to make the narrative more cohesive. If you’re interested, I’d love for you to try out another game I made Named Train to hell. I kind of spoiled the ending in it but managed to put together an okay story overall. Your thoughts would be super helpful! And yes my name is Naashit :)
