I agree, I've never done a jam so short before so I tried to limit my scope as hard as possible, Resulting in the lack of objectives, lack of unique parts per area, lack of any music, and regrettably just making the "fun" advancing the story.
I also thought about the readability during creation, i didn't think of it as a massive issue at the time but i definitely should have at least replaced the font to maybe a serif or created my own.
Thank you for leaving a review and enjoying my game, and I'm glad you enjoyed the sfx!