The writing and art are really really awesome like it's so freaking cool. The dream sequences are great.
I really like the atmosphere of the text just floating, only thing is that sometimes there's not a lot of time to read it!
And the logs in the forest are kind of hard to see for something that's an obstacle you need to avoid on the run.
I really like the progression of the game, and that its different to general runner games because you're actually running to some unknowable goal!
This game does a really cool mix of story and gameplay and if you work on it more it would be really cool to see what kind of stuff you do to make the manoeuvring change up in future levels!
There are also some scenes that are really pretty and the atmosphere when you're on the boat is really cool!