So, since people have brought up that you wrote this early I won't comment on it.
The piece itself is decent, it's got a fun jingle, and the bells in the beginning were nice, but when you have All of them going it's hard to listen to. There's too much reverb on all of them so when they're all together it amplifies. Bells are loud, having more bells or really anything Playing with them will muddy up the track and drown out any details you put in. You either have to digitally mix it or intentionally compose these bells to ring out, and not mix.
You had a fun melody though. 👍🏻