A very strong entrance for a first jamer. And then even with multiple songs! Felt like being right in the moment and venturing with the hero on his journey. Definitely "the thousand years war".
If I could advice: Your Woondwinds sometimes are having long lasting passages. Maybe think about letting room for breathing breats or edit them in for a more realisting feel.
Also your strings are quite heaby on using just Legato without any wurthor starting articulation. It might be sometimes more preferable to give them more articulation even if it is just for the start of the nex passage (might be sounding odd but singing the parts with la for legato and ta for articulated helped very much. Might be an approach).