The visuals for this game are amazing, as is the music. However, I couldn't play very far into the game before giving up because the writing often makes no sense. I think getting a proofreader who is fluent in English would help a lot. Also, the History feature is unusable because the text is rendered without any punctuation or sentence breaks. The font choice for History is VERY hard to read.
Examples of lines in the first 5 minutes that are really hard to understand due to the grammar issues:
"People believe he can be a myth or something like that."
"I'm not going to give up on catching him and handing him over to the police and show them that my dismissal was in vain."
"Sometimes I regret thinking how much this obsession with this killer consumed me."
"If you don't mind being even more outlaw..."
"It looks like his bones are made of foam, because he moves like a ragdoll."