I love all the little details that you put into this game. The zoom-in and zoom-out transition, the lighting, the transparent lamp on top of the room, the zooming and moving in camera towards the person you talk to, and many other stuff. You really know your stuff!
Besides that, the writing is already on to a good start. I feel like you draw inspiration from JRPG style of writing where things are kind of absurd and a little vague. If you keep on creating this type of writing and details to the design, things are going to be even greater!
Great job~