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The music and visual design are fantastic—while the small screen was a bit restrictive, it didn’t detract too much. The soundtrack is oppressive in a good way, setting a perfect mood. The storyline is eerie and engaging, reminding me of the 2019 film "The Lighthouse," and the text enhances the game’s atmosphere. However, I found the font a bit hard to read, especially with the text jumps, which made my eyes tired. The skill-check gameplay mechanics didn’t add much beyond distracting from the reading, and failure didn’t seem to have consequences. If more impactful, simple mechanics were added, I think it would elevate the experience further. Overall, it’s a captivating story I enjoyed diving into. Thanks for the game! :) 

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Tysm for the feedback !! I'm glad you enjoyed it ! I definitely agree with all you've said here, this was one of my first published games regardless of the jam, so I wanted to make sure any gameplay was as simple as possible, but going forward I plan to implement some more interesting and complex gameplay into my games !!

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If this is your first game jam submission, then congratulations! This is really impressive for a first attempt!