An extremely angry comment that's genuinely happy to see an ebony badass taking an MC role (we surprisingly dont see that a lot on itch.io)
One thing tho. It is really hard to get into the story with the MASSIVE info dumb at the beginning with her literally just standing there. I get that her being in her own head is part of her character, but you get that pretty quick. Could be better intersplicing with a bar-goer's comments or a non-essential choice the player could make to keep their attention. For example maybe before she goes into the big fight with her mom a QTE happens where ya gotta dodge a bottle from the patrons that are playing whatever game is clearly visible. That could then lead to the swaft of italicized dialogue.