Review time!
*Gameplay is existant but rough, compared to a common game it is mildly clunky, compared to adult games it's great!
*The little pulses and details on the game were uncessesary overall, but i FELT them, so they did their purpose, very cool of you, good job
*the dialogue was a solid 8/10, i liked it
*The scenes made me peeved, not from their content, but on how WORHTLESS they felt, they don't feel like they are part of the game, they kinda of just happen... i will repeat, the sex scenes are too disconected, and after i discovered the plot twist... CUCK (personal preference but, you know... it was exactly that). Their art was great, but i couldn't enjoy it because i was too focused on how pointless they were.
*Honestly? it felt like you wanted to share your idea, share your story, but then you kinda of just added the porn for the sake of it, or for personal desire
*the first person during cutscenes? just a bother really
*those only walk sessions (the ones on the desert), atrocious, they are not the worst, but they felt the worst, and in the other side, why the heck is there dialogue happening during the bat ambush?! it like the two extremes of dialogue mismanagement
*The story is nice, i liked the variety of concepts they were pretty great, very interesting to me... the characters though, oh my god, compared to your egyptian game, these folk are CHUMPS, i felt no connection, no fun. Their design isn't at par either, old west furry, and that is it, for a game about death, the bat, the coyote, the pig were VERY basic.
* ... DEFINITELY add something to indicate the bull's cannon is about to shoot, simple as that...
*The art, soberb! you have style, and didn't pull efforts in adding a variety of pannels. The city backdrop during the train? Extremely pleasing!!
*By the way, you managed to make a story with deep symbolism and themes without falling on your face, great job, genuinely!