Here's the mix-up of pronouns screenshot.
2nd paragraph in the screenshot: "Maybe Havard would have caught them?"
4th paragraph: "I did have to chase after them..."
Oh, one more thing, sorry. Minor typo, should be 'damage' not 'damange'. Hopefully this all helps you. :)
Thank you for all of these! I will investigate!
Edit: I think I fixed it :D New game/a save before the name choice required to fix the bug.