This one was really good!
You managed the atmosphere in a great way. Visuals are nice and the way they are presented added a lot to the experience. Sounds are perfectly designed. The story is really captivating and interesting. There's a lot to think about.
I don't have many complains as I can see how you used your whole time to develop a great experience, but if there's something you can improve, maybe adding more visual resources would be fine. There was a part of the story when I felt a little tired before reaching the climax of the game. It was a little monotonous.
Great job! I read about your games and the concept sounds really good, if you keep doing projects with this quality you'll get really far.