The game is stunningly beautiful, the graphics is fantastic, you've done a great job there. I would say however the writing could use proof reading by a native english speaker and some jokes feels like they were lost in translation. The text is also way too fast at times. But the game being so beautiful means you can overlook it, but I would really encourage you to let a native english speaker polish the writing so the game will be perfect!
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Hi there, I'm Vito, the guy who adapted the script into English.
The game is in "early access" (meaning we're still working on the final touches and bug fixes), including its translation, which I'm still working on to address the issues you have rightfully mentioned. We are going to update the game in the future, but at the moment we can't give any ETA.
After working on the game since 2016, the team felt the need to see it out in the wild, that's why we went with the "Early Access" thing, knowing full well there's still work to be done.
Thank you for your feedback and I hope you'll enjoy the definitive translation!