Vibe is on point with the theme, but after the piano starts doubling the bass part it gets a bit too muddy since a lot of the instruments are playing in the low/low mid registers. Maybe cutting some low end from the piano, or not having too many other low register doublings going on could help a bit, just my feeling.
I think you nailed the vibe of the theme for me on this, good job!
Hey, thank you! I appreciate your feedback. I focused on the low section of the orchestra to keep the sequence from becoming too bright, in line with the theme of the Jam. Thanks to the feedback I’ve received, I now realize I could have spent more time on the mix, which I didn’t due to time, practice, and technical issues. However, this has been a great opportunity to improve, and the tips I’ve received have been invaluable. Thanks again!
