Vibe is on point with the theme, but after the piano starts doubling the bass part it gets a bit too muddy since a lot of the instruments are playing in the low/low mid registers. Maybe cutting some low end from the piano, or not having too many other low register doublings going on could help a bit, just my feeling.

I think you nailed the vibe of the theme for me on this, good job!

Dark, slow intro. Works very well. Sounds kind of narrow like it isn't filling the space in the way I want it to. Sometimes people underdo reverb because they're afraid of overdoing it, when really there are some ways to mix it. One tip I got recently was reducing the EQ on the bass.

This would definitely work in a game. It definitely has a strong vibe. I feel like I'm in a 2D advernture game.

I like the addition of the Dies Irae chant in this! Heh. Funny thing about mine - for the last bit, I realized that I could sing Dies Irae to it, but I ultimately steered away from this approach because it made it sound more like an oratorio when I was going for something darker specifically for this.

I think overall the main critique is that the mix is a bit narrow and not filling the space, and then it sounds like it was clicked in. The piano is the best instrument a composer could ever know how to play, and knowing how to improvise on the piano will get you far. You're already good at composing, and I think improv would take you to a new level. That's pretty standard advice from me, but I still strongly, strongly recommend it!

Great work, and thank you for joining! :)

Very mysterious composition, keeps us on edge, very dark too fit well the theme. good job

It's dark and beautiful, good work! 

Really cool, I liked the foreboding but also kind of pensive and sad vibe that comes and goes throughout. The progression and transitions are really nice and I liked the subtle woodwinds! Nice work! 👍🏽