I don't like reading, but I earmarked you to bane that and you did good job a plenty here. I need to respect stories even ones with no reflection in my past nor owned resonation to take forward.. because they'll still do that with other people, obviously. I liked recognizing the relative humanization of the soldiers when Corris got naked, and everything about the puzzle section (idk the bad end though I could never feign to lose that one hehe). Hope this story imparts a sweeping sense of holism to many readers as it surely is primed to!,