I enjoyed this quite a bit so far. I'm not sure I found everything there is to find yet. (I havent' figured out what the water or the detention slip can be used for yet, for instance.) But I like the premise, and the main characters seem interesting. I only think that the brother should also be sending updates about his conquests. And I'd also like some more scenes between them just generally if the idea is that they are supposed to eventually get along, which I hope they do. Looking forward to see what your plan is with the adventurer guild stuff.