Sweet little game ! I think it's a nice start.
There's a few issues that I think needs to be fixed ASAP, notably:
- Have a proper gameplay loop ! While I appreciate the concept of the monolith, basically being stuck here unless you go back to the main menu, and fall infinitely is not acceptable. This is exacerbated by the fact that you are still moving, and as such still feel in the game.
- The night currently is a bit boring. Getting the fuel is not a huge challenge, and the night is way too long for what it is. I would recommend making the night either shorter, or make it more intense, by for example adding things to do during the night besides starting the generator, close blinds, open lights... and wait. I was basically looking at shorts on my phone while the night passed by doing absolutely nothing.
- Your mouse smoothing is way too aggressive. I feel like I'm moving the camera through molasses.
Less urgent points I've noticed:
- You need to draw attention to the generator and the crow tutorial for it. My first death was due to me not even having noticed the generator. Maybe the sun shouldn't start moving until you completed the tips ? Or grew the first peach ?
- You have some performance issues I think. The game was not running that smoothly, despite having a high-end computer.
- It is nigh impossible to see once caught in the dark. Add some ambient light.
- I had a few items phase into the ground when opening the boxes.
Positives points I liked:
- I like the posters you added based on the plants you grew, if I'm not mistaken. It's a nice little touch.
- You have a main menu ! It works and does its job, maybe a bit less so for the settings menu, but it's there.
- The crow working as a tutorial is a very nice touch. I would probably have been kinda lost without it.
For the lewd, well, I think it's pretty nice ! I feel like a lot of development time was put into theses dynamic bones for jiggle, amiright ? ;)
The dialogue during the 'caught' scene is simple but does its job. It's a nice touch.
I don't have recommendations on other features to add as I think the points above absolutely needs to be fixed before doing anything else. Besides, I feel like you already know where you want to go.
In any case, still, I think it's a nice foundation you have there. I can't speak for the extensibility of your code, but I do hope you'll be able to add upon it easily.
Do focus on fixing the first points I mentioned though !
Good luck ! Game-Dev is a though world out there.