The world is built, the emotion is palpable, the scene is Dark, Foreboding, and mysterious. and the flow Magnificent. Great job grabbing my attention. I would say make the drop happen sooner, the suspense was killing me as i was grappling with my shrinking attention span. But this criticism is only in response to this as a stand alone piece. i think this is really strong work in compliment with a game, movie, or tv program. I could see this as a main theme for Dexter, True detective, Peaky Blinders, etc. Its simple, elegant, minimalist when it wants it be and complicated for a season finale. You sir...smashed the assignment. Full marks, five stars, 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟